12 Point Film Critique: Terri Timely - A Persistent Vision
Subject. This film is about two small children working hard to produce animation of inanimate objects. The two boys use clay and toy cars, as well as a simple background and proper lighting. It also shows the growing talent and determination that can come from children.
Theme. The theme of this film seems to be that great things can come from simple places. I think this is a very important theme, especially in our current world where so much value is placed on money and technology.
Acting. The actors in this film (the two boys mainly) seem very natural and realistic. They just quietly work to create their animation.
Dialogue. Since this is a music video, there isn't any dialogue.
Settings. The setting is very simple: a single room with white walls that is slightly cluttered with furniture, and at the end a backyard at night. It reinforces the simplicity of the work the two boys are doing and is very believable.
Lighting. The overall lighting of the short film is very dim, except for when focusing on the actual scene of the film that the two boys are making. This puts emphasis on their work.
Sound. There are subtle sound effects of the camera clicking away and of the toys moving and coming to life. This adds to the emotion of the film by making it come alive to the viewer.
Music. The music has a calming melody that is almost child-like, which is used to complete the feel of the scene. It is very well-matched with the events going on in the film: mellow, childlike, and simplistic.
Cinematography. This video is filmed in a unique way. The scenes are separated by what seems to be a black bar, which gives the impression that is a slowed filmstrip itself. It eventually speeds up give animation to the toy figures that the two boys are working with. The manner in which this video is filmed helps convey to focus on making movies and simplicity.
Special Effects. The special effects (which include the filmstrip reel and the animation of the toys) are very subtle and natural. Although simple, they do a good job of supporting the main theme of the video.
Editing. The scenes skip a little bit of time in between each picture, although it is down in a slow and subtle manner, which is very appropriate to the action taking place. It is slow in the beginning, speeds up toward the middle, and slows down again by the end.
Overall Direction. The director or directors of the film did a good job of fitting together the music and scenes. I have little to no complaints about the way any of it was filmed; I think it was well put together in every aspect.